So far as a i student in college i am not at the level of performance i wished i would be at. I know that i have much potential to become a much better student in class and out of class meaning there is still much room from improvement by adding more to the class discussions or strengthening my  work ethic especially for major assignments.

Review of my argumentative essay 
My essay is still in a very raw stage, there are some formatting issues and problems with the sources. I have good examples but i need to find a way to incorporate them into the essay so they will give maximum support for my thesis. For now i would give my self a C since the essay is lacking vital components.